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 Krystal(the girl with the light purple miniskirt in the center) and Zile. (The girl in the black dress) This is two girls clubbing in a Lesbian club. Zima is dancing there just because she can. This took me soooo long to make but was quite fun, especially the dance floor. Sorry if the Irkens dancing look generic. I tried to make changes to it but I probably paid too much attention to certain characters than others. Zile(c) ~Highlordvenn Krystal(c) ~InvaderSarah Zima(c) me other lesbian girls dancing(c) God. Irkens in general belong to JV Comments
 Dancing Irkens 8O
Haha. Neat. Love the colours. Makes it pretty lively. -- ಠ_ರೃ I say...  Love the dance floor XD
-- "Yes you can hold my hand if you want, cuz I wanna hold yours too." -Big Girls Dont Cry "Yipee-kye-aye, mother fucker!"-Die Hard Films I Love Ben So Very Much! We're Going To Keep Holding On!  Looks good, I really like the boldness of the colours, as someone else said it makes the pic look quite lively. I also really like the costumes and look of all the other dancing Irkens too ^^
-- Who are you and why are you EATING my head? Are you Zombie Food? Find out here: [link] Quidquid latine dictum sit, altum videtur - Anything said in Latin sounds profound  This is so awesome!
 -- ♥BIG PUMPKIN ROSES FAN GIRL!!!♥     TMNT FOREVER!!!  "I Dare You To Move." by ButterscotchWM [link]  Haha Lesbirks anyway, awesome pic I absolutely love the dancefloor, as well as the outfit Zile has and Krystal's eyes are absolutely beautiful.
-- There's a fine line between genius and insanity and I play jump-rope with it. Thanks. ^^
-- You cannot reason someone out of a position they didn't reach by reason. ~~~ icon created by, *LazyMuFFin Oh wow thanks! I love the floor too, definitely my favorite part of the pic.
-- You cannot reason someone out of a position they didn't reach by reason. ~~~ icon created by, *LazyMuFFin Thank you! The colors were quite fun making.
-- You cannot reason someone out of a position they didn't reach by reason. ~~~ icon created by, *LazyMuFFin  "other lesbian girls dancing(c) God."
72 lesbian virgins in heaven for the females who have committed Jihad! Everything in this image is very well crafted and put together. The entire picture has a lot of character. -- "Nikogo Ne Zhalko." YW n.n
-- "Yes you can hold my hand if you want, cuz I wanna hold yours too." -Big Girls Dont Cry "Yipee-kye-aye, mother fucker!"-Die Hard Films I Love Ben So Very Much! We're Going To Keep Holding On! |
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Critiques
The floor also looks like it's tilting forward. The orthagonals don't look like they're going to the same horizon line, and the squares don't appear to be in perspective (the proportion of the dancers to the squares changes as they move back in perspective).
The Irken girls don't appear to be on the same horizon line, either. If they're all on the same floor plane, the one in the middle looks like a giant compared to the others, even if their heights are varied, if they were all lined up in a row, the differences would be way too skewed. Some would look like adults while the others look like midgets, and I think only the Tallest were meant to be proportionate to adults.
In terms of color, I would have liked to see some colored lights instead of just plain white lights. Since it's a dance club, all different kinds of lights are usually used, so you could have had fun with that. The floor just looks like you used the dodge tool to indicate light, which doesn't really strike me as light, they just look like bleached out areas of the floor since they're soft shaded and the characters are cell shaded.
Also in regard to color (and I know this is getting nitpicky now, I'm sorry XD) it's been recorded that Jhonen Vasquez said that Irkens only have eye colors in red, purple, shades of red or purple, or green; not pink or yellow. Female Irkens don't have breasts either, since they're not mammals and are grown in tubes, and thus wouldn't need them.
Overall, It looks like a cute commission. The costumes don't really look very Irkin... a lot of the dresses look pretty human to me, but I guess there's a story here I don't know about. I liked that you varied the skin colors of the girls, it adds a little bit of variety.
Hope that helps!
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